From e53aa90bea4201f6fcdcc8b12d2320ed0d67b027 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Steve Purcell Date: Sun, 11 Oct 2015 09:31:00 +1300 Subject: [PATCH] Better copywriting in Introduction section of README --- README.md | 17 +++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index bd3b1f1d3..896f5b31a 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -51,16 +51,17 @@ # Introduction -Spacemacs is a proposition of a complete new experience for Emacs focused -on ergonomics, mnemonics and consistency. +Spacemacs is a new way to experience Emacs -- a sophisticated and +polished set-up focused on ergonomics, mnemonics and consistency. -Clone it, launch it then press the space bar and let you guided by the built-in -interactive list of key-bindings. You can also press the `[?]` button on the -home buffer for the first essential key bindings to know. +Just clone it, launch it, then press the space bar to explore the +interactive list of carefully-chosen key bindings. You can also press +the home buffer's `[?]` button for some great first key bindings to +try. -Spacemacs can be used by Emacs or Vim users flawlessly, it is even possible -to mix the two styles. You can switch between any style at any moment which -make it a very good tool for pair-programming. +Spacemacs can be used naturally by both Emacs and Vim users -- you can +even mix the two editing styles. Switching easily between input styles +makes Spacemacs a great tool for pair-programming. Spacemacs is currently in beta, and contributions are very welcome.